1. something other people would be interested in
2. support with facts and statistics
3. hook in your reader, make connections, tell your personal experience.
Monday, April 24, 2017
Wednesday, April 19, 2017
Opinions writing preview activity
1. Who wrote the story?
editorial
2. What is their story about?
ICE
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.
they dont like it
4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
no
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
no
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
no
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
2nd
1. Who wrote the story?
reagan wallace
2. What is their story about?
betsy de vos
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.
they dont like her
4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
no
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
no
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
no
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
2nd
1. Who wrote the story?
ian miller
2. What is their story about?
the tree in bowie
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.
they want to save the tree
4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
no
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
no
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
no
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
2nd
1. Who wrote the story?
jake brien
2. What is their story about?
college and studying
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.
its good to plan ahead
4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
no
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
no
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
no
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
2nd
1. Who wrote the story?
abby ong
2. What is their story about?
the importance of physics
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.
physics is important
4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
no
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
no
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
no
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
2nd
A. a hard news is based on facts while an opinion based is based oon opinions.
B. because its opinion based. you cant have a picture of an opinion (kindof)
C.government, school, community.
A. a hard news is based on facts while an opinion based is based oon opinions.
B. because its opinion based. you cant have a picture of an opinion (kindof)
C.government, school, community.
peer review SoM
http://samuelsphotojournalismblog.blogspot.com/
Paragraphs - 50
5 quotes - 25
Inverted pyramid - 25
Extra Credit? - 0
TOTAL = 100
Paragraphs - 50
5 quotes - 25
Inverted pyramid - 25
Extra Credit? - 0
TOTAL = 100
final exam preview
1. the website i was on mostly talked about the different features of the app more than how to use it. it talks about transitions, how to shorten or elong them and how to stregnthen the effect of them and whatnot.
all of the info and the app was very similar to how movavi video editor works, which is what i use to edit videos. so hopefully this will be easy for me.
2. nothing
3. i learned that you can add transitions
4. everything
5. the photos if i dont procrastonate
6. a day in the life
all of the info and the app was very similar to how movavi video editor works, which is what i use to edit videos. so hopefully this will be easy for me.
2. nothing
3. i learned that you can add transitions
4. everything
5. the photos if i dont procrastonate
6. a day in the life
Monday, April 17, 2017
SLO practice
1. A
2. A
3. C
4. C
5. B
6. C
7. Prime minister Justin Trudeau and Malala Yousafzai talk as they walk down the Hall of Honour on Wednesday. Malala Yousafzai was the sixth person to recieve honorary citizenship.
2. A
3. C
4. C
5. B
6. C
7. Prime minister Justin Trudeau and Malala Yousafzai talk as they walk down the Hall of Honour on Wednesday. Malala Yousafzai was the sixth person to recieve honorary citizenship.
Wednesday, April 12, 2017
Monday, April 10, 2017
Nut Graf
a nut graph is a paragraph showing the value of the story. it can also be said as "nutshell paragraph" it was only shortened to nut graph. it dates to the 19th century. it is used as a lead, to hook the reader into the story.
student of the month story
On april 23, 2017 james bowie high school issued school uniforms to prevent leaving school. They will give everyone a shirt and pants that they have to wear to school and if you dont it will count against your incentive and grade.
Everyone has different opinions on this idea, because while it can help the attendance, it makes it more difficult for students and they cant adjust to the weather. mostly its the students who disagree with the idea, while the teachers support it.
James bowie highschool recently issued mandatory school uniforms."We decided to do this because students would leave in the middle of school and it would mess up their attendance, but its much easier to identify a student wearing the school uniform skipping," said school administrator Nicolas Nassour.
a lot of students do not agree with this idea "the uniforms would prevent skipping, but it makes it too hard for the students and we cant adjust to the weather properly," said student Nicolas Nassour.
James Bowie high School has 2 months to decide of they want to issue uniforms.
Everyone has different opinions on this idea, because while it can help the attendance, it makes it more difficult for students and they cant adjust to the weather. mostly its the students who disagree with the idea, while the teachers support it.
James bowie highschool recently issued mandatory school uniforms."We decided to do this because students would leave in the middle of school and it would mess up their attendance, but its much easier to identify a student wearing the school uniform skipping," said school administrator Nicolas Nassour.
a lot of students do not agree with this idea "the uniforms would prevent skipping, but it makes it too hard for the students and we cant adjust to the weather properly," said student Nicolas Nassour.
James Bowie high School has 2 months to decide of they want to issue uniforms.
Monday, April 3, 2017
student of the month interview
1.
How did you get student of the month
made good grades and helped out
did you try to get student of the month
i didnt especially try, im just trying to be a good student
did you want to be student of the month
Sure
why did you get student of the month
its satisfying
how does the student of the month work
behave, make good grades, and help out
do you plan on getting student of the month again?
yes
how do you feel about getting student of the month
pretty good
what is student of the month
a title you get for being a good student
do you get rewards for being student of the month
Only the title
do people praise you for getting student of the month
my friends do a little, just a "nice"
what makes being student of the month different from a normal student
nothing really
is trying for student of the month worth it
Sure why not
how would you feel if you didnt get student of the month
it wouldnt matter to me much
how do you feel about people who didnt get student of the month
i dont look down on them
how are you treated differently after getting student of the month
im not really
how are students picked for student of the month
they have to have good grades, behave, have minimum absenses
is student of the month a big deal
not really
when did you get student of the month
a week ago
how did you find out that you were student of the month
said on the intercom
how do other people know you are student of the month
said on intercom
are you recognized for being student of the month?
i cant tell, since nothing really changed much
How did you get student of the month
made good grades and helped out
did you try to get student of the month
i didnt especially try, im just trying to be a good student
did you want to be student of the month
Sure
why did you get student of the month
its satisfying
how does the student of the month work
behave, make good grades, and help out
do you plan on getting student of the month again?
yes
how do you feel about getting student of the month
pretty good
what is student of the month
a title you get for being a good student
do you get rewards for being student of the month
Only the title
do people praise you for getting student of the month
my friends do a little, just a "nice"
what makes being student of the month different from a normal student
nothing really
is trying for student of the month worth it
Sure why not
how would you feel if you didnt get student of the month
it wouldnt matter to me much
how do you feel about people who didnt get student of the month
i dont look down on them
how are you treated differently after getting student of the month
im not really
how are students picked for student of the month
they have to have good grades, behave, have minimum absenses
is student of the month a big deal
not really
when did you get student of the month
a week ago
how did you find out that you were student of the month
said on the intercom
how do other people know you are student of the month
said on intercom
are you recognized for being student of the month?
i cant tell, since nothing really changed much
interview
1. principal, administrator, teacher, student, janitor, officer.
2.
how do you feel about uniforms
do you want uniforms
why do you know/think they made uniforms a requirement
are uniforms really worth it
what are the downside of uniforms
does everyone have to wear a uniform
what are the uniforms
will the uniforms act as a pass into the school
are the uniforms required
will all uniforms be the same
can you wear clothing on top of the uniform
can you wear other accessories
is it temporary
are the uniforms free?
what if the uniform breaks
what if a student comes to school without their uniform
will the uniform be shirt, pants or both
will students be rewarded for wearing uniforms
will the uniform represent the school
where did they get the idea for a uniform
2.
how do you feel about uniforms
do you want uniforms
why do you know/think they made uniforms a requirement
are uniforms really worth it
what are the downside of uniforms
does everyone have to wear a uniform
what are the uniforms
will the uniforms act as a pass into the school
are the uniforms required
will all uniforms be the same
can you wear clothing on top of the uniform
can you wear other accessories
is it temporary
are the uniforms free?
what if the uniform breaks
what if a student comes to school without their uniform
will the uniform be shirt, pants or both
will students be rewarded for wearing uniforms
will the uniform represent the school
where did they get the idea for a uniform
Sports portfolio
1alyssa
2eating disorder
3too depressing, to similar, no feeling
4background, the happy parts
5it was ok
1travis
2deaf
3too much foreground, staged, merging
4the ones that werent staged, wierdness
5 it was ok
1nick
2disabilities
3no focus, boring, bad framing
4fills four corners, good emphasis
5it was ok
1jordan
2sports
3cant see people, people not doing anything interesting, too set up
4looks real, cool,
5it was ok
1lots of action
2photography was good
1used elimination
1 on part one with the surfer guy i agree that the frame neded to be tighter
2on part two with the baseball field i thought it was cool
2eating disorder
3too depressing, to similar, no feeling
4background, the happy parts
5it was ok
1travis
2deaf
3too much foreground, staged, merging
4the ones that werent staged, wierdness
5 it was ok
1nick
2disabilities
3no focus, boring, bad framing
4fills four corners, good emphasis
5it was ok
1jordan
2sports
3cant see people, people not doing anything interesting, too set up
4looks real, cool,
5it was ok
1lots of action
2photography was good
1used elimination
1 on part one with the surfer guy i agree that the frame neded to be tighter
2on part two with the baseball field i thought it was cool
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